The Odyssey was a tale of a heroic man named Odysseus. Odysseus was no stranger to a challenge; he even had to fight for his hand in marriage. Odysseus married a women named Penelope and they had one child together. Their child was named Telemachus, now a young boy who wants to be a hero just like his father. One day, Odysseus was forced to leave and embark into battle. The Trojan War was a fierce battle in a far away land. Consequently, Telemachus was left to protect Penelope and their home in Ithaca, Greece. Penelope had no idea when Odysseus would return, but kept his memory alive as she told her son of his heroic exploits. This is the story of Telemachus’s journey to one day reunite with his father.
Penelope tells heroic stories to Telemachus (age 6) about his father Odysseus while Telemachus plays in the court yard in Ithaca adorning his father’s clothes. Moreover, Telemachus imagines the time when he will be fighting monsters, battling gods, and sailing across the open sea.
After several days at sea, Telemachus and his men found the stranded ship. They disembarked and searched the nearest island. Telemachus saw someone in the distance and approached the man. Telemachus asked the man his name and where he was from. He looked very weathered and hungry, but replied he was from Ithaca. Telemachus asked once again his name. The man replied, I am Odysseus of Ithaca, son of Laertes. Telemachus and his crew were stunned and in disbelief. Telemachus tested the man to ensure he was not lying. He asked the man,” if you are Odysseus what is your son’s name, his mother’s name, and the name of the Cyclops Odysseus defeated”. The man replied,” Telemachus, Penelope, and Polyphemus.” Telemachus decided that this must have been Odysseus, and told him his name. I am your son Telemachus, I searched for you for years and I have finally found you. I have much to tell you. As do I, replied Odysseus.
I haven't really read it closely yet, but the artwork is great!
ReplyDeleteThis is a cross between story board and story, really moving into illustrated story (almost like a children's book), which is pretty cool. You know Telemachus does go looking for his dad in the Odyssey, but you have changed it a bit in having him encounter Cyclops. Notably, in your version, Telemachus shows that he's related to his dad with his quick wit. The one place where I wonder if you could add just a little more is after Telemachus returns home, and before he meets his dad again. What is he doing? Clearly, his journey caused him to come to manhood, so how does he show that when he gets home? Otherwise, this is very nice indeed!
DeleteThe art is very good. The story gives a good idea of what Telemachus would have done while he was growing up. It does feel like some scenes have little detail however, like they only have the information telling you exactly what happened.
ReplyDeletethe artwork is awesome they gave me a good idea for a sensation that I may do in the future the story was very detailed and clear I liked it
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