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A couple
years ago my younger brother, whose name I need not mention here, was seriously
ill. When it all started we thought that he just had a fever and he would be
fine in a couple days, but it only got worse as the days passed by. We had to
take him to a doctor a hundred miles away from our house. It turned out that
our brother had paranoia. The doctor explained to us that he was heavily
influenced by fear, to the point of irrationality and delusion. Nights were
even worse when the moon was full and bright. He could wake up in the middle of
the night and start screaming “Stop trying to eat me”.
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I
have read that it is fairly normal for everyone to have some degree of paranoia
about certain situations in their lives. However, my brother takes it to the
extreme, he thinks that other people, including mother, our little sister, and
myself, want to harm him, even though we consistently tell him otherwise. It
got hard to get along with him and we started arguing with him more often. He
used to spend nights and days in his room without talking to us or even eating.
When the whole family got together for dinner he was very stubborn and
sarcastic around us. One day he even said: So, what’s for dinner tonight? Our
neighbors have been looking tasty” I don’t know how to help him, how to save
him from this madness.
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We
lost track of how many times we tried to help him. Our friends recommended a
very good psychologist that has experience in treating this kind of personality
disorder, but my brother refused any help from us or anybody else. He is in
constant fear that we are all cannibals, and that sooner or later we will try
to harm him.
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Today
I tried to have an honest conversation with my brother telling him that we are his family
and he should trust us. He interrupted me before I finished talking; he took a
knife from the kitchen table and told me if I don’t stay away from him he would
hurt me. I didn’t have another choice but to leave. I don’t know what happened,
but my brother isn’t the man that he used to be.
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It’s
been three months since my brother got sick. It’s unbearable to live with him
in the same house anymore. He was constantly accusing us of cannibalism. My
mother, little sister, and I had a family meeting today and we all decided that
it would be better for everybody if we put him in a hospital for long-term
psychotherapy.
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Today
is the four year anniversary since we put my brother in the hospital. The doctor is
saying that he is doing very well and it is possible that in a month we can
take him home. O gosh, I missed him so much!
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Yesterday we got a call at 5 am from the hospital
saying that my brother escaped to the roof and that we needed to get to the
hospital as soon as we can. By the time we got there my brother was dead. He accidentally fell to his death, when security attempted to grab him. I still can’t
believe that happened…
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Recently
I started to have a feeling that I passionately need to eat raw meat. I always
ask nurses to cook my meat raw, and have had no interest in any other type of
food. Everybody in the hospital smells like meat to me, so I try to stay away
from everyone. My mom comes to visit me once a week. My sister, though, hasn’t visited
me yet. Maybe if I invite her for dinner some time, she will accept. I’ll even
invite the neighbors—they look tasty.
looking better, Maria! Didn't get to read too close, but it looks good.
ReplyDeleteI was reading very quickly on Saturday, but as I look at this again, I do like it. Like Derrick I like that twist at the end. Kind of creepy, but definitely gets me ready for Transference II.
DeleteWell done Maria. This is a good story, and I like the twist at the end. There are a few spelling errors, but overall very well written! :)
ReplyDeleteNice story Maria! Well written, just needed a few commas included in certain parts of it. Other than that, nice job! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job. Nice touch at the end, talking about how the neighbors "look tasty", that was a cool reference to the original madman.
ReplyDeleteI liked the story, it was well-written. I liked the perspective the best I think, the outside looking in. The last paragraph was a good twist, to think the brother wasn't insane after all. There were a few comma placements you should look over, but overall is was awesome.
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