The
Man Who Changed The Heart of A Queen Witch
By:
Bernice Schnick
The Aeaean island
is my home, and whenever someone comes to visit me, well let’s just say, they
do not return to the land they came from. I am Circe, and I know I hold some of
the most powerful knowledge of magic potions. It gets lonely sometimes living
in this huge mansion all alone, but nothing is going to stop me from using my
powers to my advantage. Whenever someone dares to enter my mansion and walk
past my gates, I have no choice but to direct them into my mansion, misleading
them to believe that they are going to have a great time with me in my mansion.
Then after they are comfortable, I mix poison into each and every visitor’s
food or drink. After they consume it, they become animals. I can change them to
whatever I want, from lions to rabbits! When that happens I get to keep them in
my house or yard forever! So technically I am not as alone as I think, but
sometimes I wish there was one who proved to be strong enough to overcome my
spell, now that would prove he is worthy
enough for my love.
Today started off
like a regular day, me being able to bask in my glory of being a goddess and
walking around my lovely mansion. The weather was quite warm, and I just had a
feeling I was going to run into some more victims today and that I would soon
have more animals roaming around my house. I know there are people out there to
defeat me, but I am too great and powerful for that to ever happen. I am the
Queen of Aeaean and no one will ever be able to take that away from me. Just as
I was reassuring myself of the great power that I possess, I noticed a group of
men who looked like warriors wandering around. As I witnessed them walking to
my house, I smiled to myself and whispered “And let the games begin”, each and
every entrapment of man is new and exciting each time.
These men wander
up to my door and I pretended not to notice. I casually sing and know the men
stop to listen. My soothing voice lures them closer to my lair of magic and
entrapment. I hear them call out to me and praise me because of my
magnificence. I invite them all into what will soon be their final destination,
because after they eat my poison, they will never leave. I smirk at the thought
of this, knowing they are so innocent and do not see it coming. Although there
was one foolish, or I guess smart, one that stayed behind sensing a trap, I
laugh at his accusation and invite him in again.
“Come in and enjoy
all that my mansion and I have to offer you and your men” I say in a tempting
and innocent tone.
“I do not trust
you one bit and if my men were not delirious from being on this journey for
such a time I think they would be able to sense it too, I can only warn them so
many times, let their foolishness and greed take over. I will not fall under
your wicked ways, even though I am not sure what they are I know you possess
them” said the man
I merely shrug and
whisper “your loss” as I shut the doors to my mansion securely. As I look back
out the window, I see the man running like he had seen a ghost. I think to
myself better hurry this along before some other foolish man thinks they can
rescue the men in my grasp. Once those men entered my mansion their fate was
doomed. I escorted the men to a huge dining room table and promised them am
exquisite meal, one they have never had anywhere along their journey. The men
eagerly ate up what I put in front of them not even asking what it was, typical
men. Little did they know that I mixed a potion in the food they were
consuming. One by one they turned into pigs in front of each other’s eyes. As
they turned into pigs, they lost all recollection of their home and the urgency
of the journey that they were on. Each
screech of horror at the sight of their friends turning into pigs and knowing any
second they were next was music to my ears. I grinned devilishly at the men who
pleaded with me. At last each and every one of them turned into pigs and I sent
them into their pens mockingly throwing pig food at them as they left.
I sat alone in my
mansion once again, thinking about how I much desired a man who could fulfil my
needs, but none of them were strong enough to challenge me. Maybe that man who
did not want to enter my mansion, maybe he was a possible candidate. As I was
deep in thought, I heard a man hollering for me from my front gates. I turned
on my charm and opened my door, ahh another helpless victim has fallen into my
trap I think as I smile at the man. I invite him in, wow this is a good day I
think to myself as I lead him in. I lead him to one of the most special of
chairs in my mansion. I give him a drink mixed with my toxic potion. I wait in
anticipation for the spell to work. My mind turns into a panic mess when I
realize it does not work. I use my last resort which is my wand to physically
cast the spell. To my horror that did not work either! As the realization that
he cannot fall under my spell hit me, he ran at me with his sword. Terror I
have never experienced struck me and I got on my knees and begged while crying.
Tears ran down my cheeks as I pleaded for answers.
I went into
hysterics “Are you the one? The one who has the power overcome me, the one who
cannot be cursed?! Who are you oh great one? I beg of you, answer me I need to
know. I saw you drink the poison and nothing happened!! No one has ever been
able to overcome one of my spells!! You have the kind of mind that cannot be
tricked or tempted! I have been waiting for you!”
Then it dawned on
me as I was hysterically screaming the questions and crying “There is only one
person you can be, Odysseus, I have heard stories of you! If there was one man
who cannot fall to my spells and tricks I am forever grateful that it is
you!”
He nodded ever so
slowly not knowing whether to keep listening or finish me off there. I knew I would
have to step up my game.
I slowly get up
and say “come with me and I will make sure you understand how grateful I really
am that you have finally come to me” I grab his hand and try to lead him up to
my bedroom. As we were almost to the stairs he stopped me and forced me to look
at him and stop walking.
“You devil will
receive nothing from me. You turned my men into pigs and cast them outside for
them to wander for eternity! I am here in this house not for you but for my
men. I will not even consider being with you for a second till you swear to me
that you will undo the spell on them and never harm me or them” the words spat
from Odysseus’ mouth angrily.
He seemed quite
surprised when I began to swear to him that I would never do harm to him. He did
not understand how long I had been waiting for a man like him to come along. He
seemed quite pleased after I made my oath for his safety while in my mansion. I
ordered my maids to prepare the bedroom just as Odysseus would like it. I
walked him up to a blazing fire and a table strewn with food all over it. I
left him in there to eat and I come back and he has not touched a single piece
of his meal that was in front of him. I urge him to eat, but I can tell the
sorrow in his eyes and I knew no amount of food would be able to fix that
sadness. I knew what was coming next. He begged me to lift the spell that I had
on his men and let them enjoy this non-cursed meal with him. I sigh and mumble
“If this was anyone else”, knowing he had made me swear not to hurt him and
knowing not undoing the spell on his friends would hurt him, I walked away
knowing what I needed to do.
I walk to where I
had left Odysseus’ cursed men. I lift the spell and make them stronger and
healthier than they were before. When I brought his men back to him, the
emotion displayed by not only him but also the men when they saw him was
extreme. They all embraced each other, crying, and it even made me feel a
little sympathetic for putting them through that. Gosh, this Odysseus man has
messed with me more than anyone ever has. He proved his worth though when he
overcame my spell. I have a little suspicion someone might have helped him. I
do not know how, but I also do not really care now that he is here with me. He
thanked me for lifting the spell and said he would comply to my request from
earlier. So while Odysseus and I left the men, I ordered my maids to wait on
the men hand and foot.
The same routine
happened for the next year. I have never been so happy in my life, waking up
next to Odysseus, knowing he was the one I had been looking for. One day I saw
the faces on his men become different and that worried me. I became even more
concerned when they insisted on talking to him. I felt my heart sink when I saw
his face when he came back into the bedroom. I knew what he was about to say
was not going to make me happy. He confesses his men want to leave my mansion
and continue on their journey. I knew this day would come, but I feel like it
came too fast. Odysseus talked about his home with such enthusiasm that I knew
he would never feel truly fulfilled if he stayed here. I granted him permission
to head back on his journey. It hurt worse than I thought it would to say he
could leave me.
I sent Odysseus on
a journey down to the House of Death so he could turn to the ghost of Tiresias
who had information I knew Odysseus would need to know. I saw some sadness in
his eyes as he left, but I think I was the one who felt worse. I had been
waiting for the love of a man like him for what seemed like forever, and when
he walked into my mansion I finally thought it was possible to love. Now
watching him walk out that door down the path with his men following him whole
heartedly, I wept more than I ever had for it was then I realized I fell in
love with Odysseus, and watching him go is the hardest thing I have ever
experienced.
I like the story so much, there would be nothing I would change about it.
ReplyDeleteBernice, I like this a lot. What a great perspective on Odysseus; this switched point-of-view really helps me see the story from a different, more enriching, perspective. Yes, as much as we would want to criticize Odysseus for cheating on Penelope, he did change the heart of a witch! This is very good indeed; my primary suggestion is that you proofread, especially for verb tense. Most of this story is in the past tense, but it shifts occasionally to the present, and that really seems inconsistent. The entire story should be in the past. Also watch out for a couple spelling errors. But very nice work, indeed!
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